Out of the Blue

Posted: February 11, 2013 by dukefrederick in 100 Word challenge, creative writing, Flash fiction
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Out of the blue and into the red. They said it would be better here- this department, this uniform, this colour. Personally I preferred the blue but a promotion is nice. In the blue department we controlled the skies and water. I’ve had to leave all my friends behind. They weren’t my real friends. I’ve been put on an assignment- one o’clock this morning I was rudely awoken by the Sun. It hasn’t been around for years. It told me to come to this room. I’m waiting for something… someone. He arrived. I wasn’t told it would be that bad. I was lost.

100 Word Challenge Prompt: Out of the Blue by Hannala Year 11

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Comments
  1. aleunam says:

    I wish I could write like this … This sounds like the good beginning to a science fiction story! well done.

  2. INC says:

    Great stuff!
    I like the way you have used the prompt. It is a really effective story and a super read.

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