Posted: March 20, 2012 by rosalindayli in Flash fiction, poetry, Pupil, Schoolwork

Ryan was reflecting back on his life, fifty years ago when he was only fifteen- year-old lad. This is the memory of his true love not to be. He had a flash back to a familiar darkened forest, the reason why his life has gone so downhill. Walking past the tangled trees in the corner of his eye, was a lady in a white lace dress, the pattern was of swirly flowers. “Ryan! I haven’t seen you in ages.” Ryan was confused. He remembered her name was Becca. He hugged her and they began walking along the woods. Soon they reached the cliff side. It started to rain. It reminded Becca of spiders spinning silk webs. Ryan asked Becca why she was in the forest first place. Becca had a huge grin on her face. It almost looked scary. “I’ve been killing… I want you to help me,” she carefully kissed Ryan. “No!” shouted Ryan, and pushed Becca off the cliff edge.
She was never seen again.

  1. INC says:

    Creepy! I like the way it starts off with such an ordinary encounter and then turns so dark.
    I shall be interested to see how you edit it. It would be good to add a title.
    I have never thought of rain being like spiders webs. It is a strong image. Well done

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