Around the world on Shrove Tuesday people take part in pancake races and competitions. Shrove Tuesday is the day before Lent. An important time in the Christian calendar, Lent lasts for forty days and represents the time Jesus spent in the wilderness.
On Pancake Day there are competitions there are races, competitions to see who can cook the biggest pancake, the biggest pancake in the world weighed three tones and had over two million calories.
People eat simply during Lent they also use up the eggs and butter they won’t eat during Lent by making pancakes.
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Posted: February 24, 2012 by orlandoayli in Event, festivals and remembrance, Globe, ICT and eSafety at EvelinaTags: pancakes, shrove, shrove tuesday, tuesday
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Well done for getting this posted, Roo. It is short and sweet, and has all the main points, good.
When you reread it, look for how you could move the last sentence to earlier in the piece to make it clearer.
I agree with the previous comment – well done on this piece of writing. It is a very clear summary for anyone wanting to know the main points about Shrove Tuesday. I agree that you could think about reorganising your sentences to improve your work. As well as thinking about moving the last sentence into the first paragraph you could also consider moving the first sentence into the last.
Say that is good facts:-)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!