Monster Poem

Posted: January 19, 2011 by ROH in fun, general, ROH, Schoolwork, Uncategorized
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 We have been learning about simile poems

 There’s a monster in my bedroom, mum, I’ll tell you what it’s like,

Its head is like a grinning shark

Its body is like a rotten corpse Its claws are like jagged rocks

 Its teeth are like blunt razor blades

 I know you don’t believe me, mum, But hurry up, it’s getting closer, It’s…….aaarrrggghhh!

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Comments
  1. evelinasec says:

    Nice work roh!
    But something’s gone awry with the layout of your poem. Could you adjust it please? 🙂

  2. holliebain says:

    You have described the head, body and teeth of the monster, can you think of anymore body parts to your monster that are similies. Perhaps this could become a new stanza.

    Well Done!

  3. holliebain says:

    You have described the head, body and teeth on your monster, can you think of anymore body parts that you can make a simile? Perhaps this can make a new stanza.

    Well Done!

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