Autumn comes in many colours Grey as the squirrels in the parkand the early morning mist
Red as the sky in the morning
And the embers jumping from the fire
Yellow as the proud sunflower weeping at the ground
And corn on the cob bursting from it’s leaves
Green as the frogs on lily pads
And the grass swaying in the wind
Blue as the foggy mist falling from the sky
And as the wild berries bursting with juice
Brown as the old tree at the bottom of the forest
As the mud on the ground
Black as the sky in the morning
And as my favourite jacket
ROH’s Autumn Colours
Posted: September 28, 2010 by ROH in poetry, Pupil, ROHTags: autumn, autumn colours, poems
Comments
I like the line about the proud sunflower ROH. 8) The yellow on the white background is quite difficult to read. Could you maybe try a larger font, or use bold?
I know what you mean by the last line, but I think you could phrase it more elegantly, with a little more thought
Thank you fore the loverly comment 🙂 I hope you like the changes I changed the yellow to a darker shade and made it bold and I changed the last line to somthing more personal.
Yes I think that works much better ROH. Well done!
8)