ROH’s Autumn Colours

Posted: September 28, 2010 by ROH in poetry, Pupil, ROH
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Autumn comes in many colours Grey as the squirrels in the park

and the early morning mist


Red as the sky in the morning

And the embers jumping from the fire


Yellow as the proud sunflower weeping at the ground

And corn on the cob bursting from it’s leaves


Green as the frogs on lily pads

And the grass swaying in the wind


Blue as the foggy mist falling from the sky

And as the wild berries bursting with juice


Brown as the old tree at the bottom of the forest

As the mud on the ground


Black as the sky in the morning

And as my favourite jacket

  1. evelinasec says:

    I like the line about the proud sunflower ROH. 8) The yellow on the white background is quite difficult to read. Could you maybe try a larger font, or use bold?

    I know what you mean by the last line, but I think you could phrase it more elegantly, with a little more thought

  2. ROH says:

    Thank you fore the loverly comment 🙂 I hope you like the changes I changed the yellow to a darker shade and made it bold and I changed the last line to somthing more personal.

  3. evelinasec says:

    Yes I think that works much better ROH. Well done!

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