Fatal Stabbing In Upper Norwood

Posted: July 5, 2010 by rosalindayli in general, HBL, news, Pupil
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Zac Olumegbon was stabbed to death outside his school on Friday morning. This brings the number of teenage deaths from knife crime to 13 in 2010 and the ninth fatal stabbing victim in London 2010.  

A police officer said “I am sure it was a planned attack, and also gang related.”

 A second teenager was stabbed in the arm but wasn’t a fatal stabbing.  

Zac was on his way to school where he was stabbed outside the gates at Park Campus School. A teacher noticed something was going on and rushed over to him, where he was lying bleeding.

One south London mother said ” I am very concerned, about my son growing up in London and mixing with boys outside, without a chance of getting to know the group.” I am also trying to organise group activities, in a sports clubs,  and places of intrest, where they are supervised in those organisations which are safe. And also I know I need to monitor the place and times where he is spending his time outside of the house.”

Five teenagers have been arrested in connection with the killing.

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Comments
  1. evelinasec says:

    Nice and concise HBL with all the main facts.
    Now for a little editing.
    I don’t know what this sentence means: This brings the number of teenage deaths to 13 and the ninth fatal stabbing victim in London 2010.
    Your quote is quite long, consider how you could edit it so that it still conveys the point the parent wants to make.
    🙂

  2. j.c says:

    Well done hbl a nice piece of work I like it because I can hear your voice in it well done x

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