Roslinds dear diary

Posted: May 20, 2010 by orlandoayli in Globe
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Dear diary,

Today was scary with Duke Fredrick’s eyes full of anger, i was scared did not know what to do, did not know where to run. Celia was there right by my side to help me. Ive got to do into the forest and they think I’m banished.

I cannot believe I’m going to the forest with my best friend Celia, what do I do? I am excited to go but scared at the same time .I can’t believe it, the forest is dark and scary and that’s where I’m going. Forest here I come.

forest

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Comments
  1. evelinasec says:

    Some very nice touches in this JC.
    I particularly like ‘I am excited to go but scared at the same time’ which captures the mood exactly.
    There are a few places where you need to check and correct your punctuation.
    I was going to say the spelling was perfect, but you need to check the names!
    Well done. 🙂
    What tags could you add to this?

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